Looks quite promising although I dont really like kis face. Dunno, I guess it reminds me of these typical beautiful Final Fantasy guys. He doesnt quite look like a Sasuke to me.
He has some slight anatomical issues too, I think. The angle of the clavicle looks too high. I think it should point downwards to the middle. His chest feels a bit flat. It's very well rendered but it lacks some volume. I have the feeling that his perspective might be slightly off. The feet seem to be in exactly the same direction as the shoulders. I'd like to try and prolong the left leg a bit to increse the angle difference.
Of course I dont know where you want to go with this painting, but I think some difference in detail levels could help making the piece more interesting. If you want it to be equally rendered everywhere, that's fine with me. Personally I'd like some areas to be a bit rougher and other more detailed.
honestly these crits seems me really hater-style surely everybody is free to say his opinion, but it should be well explained and motivated. U can say u dont like something, but that doesnt mean is wrong. If you say the anatomy is broken, I suggest you to check it better.And explain why in detail, since a piece of this quality, deserves that. I checked your gallery btw, and I think if somebody would use the same critque-approach u used here, that could hurt. Critiques are always welcome for me, and I appreciate when people points my errors, that helps me to improve. But if you do that, I suggest you to explain them a little deeper, otherwise ther s the risk somebody could take critiques in the wrong way. And since art is very intense and deep for many of us, it s good to feel free but honest when dealin with other people'e efforts. At least this is what I think. You are welcome to see my gallery, and express yurself in total freedom. But honestly
What ? Hater style ? You might be a little too easy with your choice of words. I explained everything I thought to be off and I didnt swear, offend or anything that could be "hater". I didnt even write in absolutes, most are in "could be" or "I think". And I even finished with "Still, a very good and well done picture." Not much hate there.
And honestly, I would appreciate comments like my own, even if they might be a little harsh/honest. Have a nice day.
In this kind of pictures, there is lot of work, passion and expression. So I think that if you take the time to write a critique you have also to explain it. Explaining in deep. Then it's ok. Then you are using your time to help a fellow artist to improve. But doing a critique is a serious thing. Surely DA is happy community ,luckly, and everybody is free to write their opinion. But the "hater-style" factor I pointed is when u throw the stone and hide the hand. In my opinion your critique was half made, and that s a thing that doesnt help the artist you are checking. You are always free to write comments, even say you dont like a piece or whatever. But half-made critiques are not the same thing. I love when people critiques my stuff. That s much worthy than a 2 seconds -I luv it- comment. But if you go serious on a picture,I think it s fair to go serious and explain very well what you are speaking about. It s not absoulutely a question of harshness. Harshness, if motivated and not free, is a good pushing factor. I hope my poor english allowed me to show you my point, but that s just my point. Have a nice day to you)
thank you for the comment, actually i dun agree with your crits but hey its all good is pretty obvious that isn't the sasuke of kishimoto but is remade in my style so i can do his face as i want lol, u pointed out really a lot of things that u think r wrong haha thank you anyway
dude, you rock !! can't wait to see more of your work especially if you plan to release a serie of illustrations based on naruto characters. Uchiha brothers are my faves too with Zabuza ! too much charisma ^^